I have learned a great lesson that should never be left out when writing a story this week. That lesson is to ask for other peoples opinions. After my submission was all finished I emailed it to a few close people to read. The feedback that I received from doing this was amazing! There were so many details that would have been left out that I did not think to include. The hardest part now is getting is it down to 800 words. For the past few days I have been fixing, tweaking, and reading my entry over and over. Everything should be perfect and all ready to post in the next couple days!